tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post2355894461434376923..comments2023-10-04T04:05:26.777-07:00Comments on Adventures In Writing: No Kiss Blogfest!Lindsayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-5172044258768748072012-01-03T23:03:48.250-08:002012-01-03T23:03:48.250-08:00Great tension, Lindsay. I'm glad I stopped by ...Great tension, Lindsay. I'm glad I stopped by to read this piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-72786853392623468202012-01-03T16:12:19.881-08:002012-01-03T16:12:19.881-08:00Nice! I didn't even notice the length.Nice! I didn't even notice the length.Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-88068504547551923762012-01-03T15:58:32.936-08:002012-01-03T15:58:32.936-08:00Ohh no problem on the length, you sucked me in. I ...Ohh no problem on the length, you sucked me in. I want to know more!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-69168129215991139012012-01-03T10:25:15.632-08:002012-01-03T10:25:15.632-08:00...am I the only one thinking 'stalker!' w......am I the only one thinking 'stalker!' when I read he climbed into her room (and bed) without her permission/knowledge?<br /><br />Like Charity said, you left me with a lot of curiosity/questions about your story :)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-49842195959564598222012-01-03T08:50:03.533-08:002012-01-03T08:50:03.533-08:00Oooooh, NICE!!!!Oooooh, NICE!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-5406736480266490452012-01-02T22:03:40.192-08:002012-01-02T22:03:40.192-08:00Oh please do go on :D Great job! Thanks for sharin...Oh please do go on :D Great job! Thanks for sharing! Nothing wrong with the length!C.V. Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882270682230422885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-69498832709519254892012-01-02T18:18:43.102-08:002012-01-02T18:18:43.102-08:00Awesome! I'm loving your book. Can't wait ...Awesome! I'm loving your book. Can't wait to read the whole thing. :)Janet Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12688012956157161889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-47036601797973142182012-01-02T18:16:10.071-08:002012-01-02T18:16:10.071-08:00:O
That was fantastic. And I looove the name Asher...:O<br />That was fantastic. And I looove the name Asher. And I want to read more of this. Seriously.KT Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08142350855635462698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-29839225739931849572012-01-02T17:31:54.976-08:002012-01-02T17:31:54.976-08:00I loved the Romeo and Juliet weaved into the story...I loved the Romeo and Juliet weaved into the story. I am always intrigued by societies that forbid or disapprove of love. I want to read more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-24002617922469077842012-01-02T16:14:02.216-08:002012-01-02T16:14:02.216-08:00Danger Will Robinson! Danger! Nicely done.Danger Will Robinson! Danger! Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-32660830345138155302012-01-02T15:29:03.556-08:002012-01-02T15:29:03.556-08:00#TeamAsher
God, I missed my Ash man. I agree with...#TeamAsher<br /><br />God, I missed my Ash man. I agree with ALL the above praise, of course. Cruel, cruel way to say goodbye to the Ash man... <br /><br />*reaches for more pages*Amparo Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-53513960089371646632012-01-02T14:36:09.837-08:002012-01-02T14:36:09.837-08:00Ahhh!!! That was a good one. Great job Lindsay!Ahhh!!! That was a good one. Great job Lindsay!ali crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023009704454279645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-42045055125835910972012-01-02T14:00:57.356-08:002012-01-02T14:00:57.356-08:00This was excellent. Loved it!!! You absolutely NAI...This was excellent. Loved it!!! You absolutely NAILED the tension in this scene.Kate Avery Ellisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16639363051736890588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-51395394614884598062012-01-02T13:25:40.282-08:002012-01-02T13:25:40.282-08:00ooh nice, i loved all the romeo and juliet talk an...ooh nice, i loved all the romeo and juliet talk and how it lengthened the scene nicely.Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-48582405914033888602012-01-02T12:05:32.589-08:002012-01-02T12:05:32.589-08:00The way you mixed in the romeo and juilet story he...The way you mixed in the romeo and juilet story here was so fantastic. This scene has so much heartbreaking tension...great snippet ^_^Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-56141537730732231932012-01-02T12:01:28.450-08:002012-01-02T12:01:28.450-08:00Length was fine. I loved the Romeo and Juliet refe...Length was fine. I loved the Romeo and Juliet references/connections. Great tension. Kept waiting for someone to barge in and interrupt.jaybirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10708353376256621965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-21874376061763001332012-01-02T11:50:32.442-08:002012-01-02T11:50:32.442-08:00No! It can' end there. I love Asher. He seems ...No! It can' end there. I love Asher. He seems like a really great character to write, Aura does as well. I really want to happen next. Will Asher escape in time or will they get caught? <br /><br />Gah! SO GOOD.Raven Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03538947519732493635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-76950976755009842022012-01-02T11:40:04.142-08:002012-01-02T11:40:04.142-08:00I love Aura's confusion and innocence. The who...I love Aura's confusion and innocence. The whole thing was lovely. So many entries are raising all these questions in my mind. Your's did as well. I love it when snippets make me ask questions that make me want to keep reading.<br /><br />Great job!Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-41654103728392558572012-01-02T11:04:41.618-08:002012-01-02T11:04:41.618-08:00No worries about the length! I was captivated. Eve...No worries about the length! I was captivated. Even though this is a NO-KISS blogfest, honestly, you kept me wondering right up until they were interrupted!Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-42744164152176983922012-01-02T10:53:16.353-08:002012-01-02T10:53:16.353-08:00Nice scene! Loved it!Nice scene! Loved it!Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-45329268308139413122012-01-02T10:16:30.324-08:002012-01-02T10:16:30.324-08:00That ending was just cruel! Great scene!That ending was just cruel! Great scene!Nicole Settlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06205918337710478398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-92031470185160976982012-01-02T09:47:00.598-08:002012-01-02T09:47:00.598-08:00Ooooh nice, such heated tension between their bodi...Ooooh nice, such heated tension between their bodies! Thanks for participating again! :DFrankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-47732657938032115192012-01-02T09:12:46.813-08:002012-01-02T09:12:46.813-08:00I had noooo problem with the length! This has the ...I had noooo problem with the length! This has the perfect amount of tension and Aura's slight discomfort with the situation is perfect.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-32277940666618065242012-01-02T08:24:43.017-08:002012-01-02T08:24:43.017-08:00About to be busted!About to be busted!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com