tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post4761324768140805617..comments2023-10-04T04:05:26.777-07:00Comments on Adventures In Writing: No Kiss blogfestLindsayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-18354206771750113762011-01-06T15:57:42.551-08:002011-01-06T15:57:42.551-08:00Awww ... so near, yet so far. Does Jackson have an...Awww ... so near, yet so far. Does Jackson have any idea why? *sigh* there are so many hidden currents here! Great little piece.<br /><br />:Dom (<a href="http://www.dominicdemattos.blogspot.com/2011/01/no-kiss-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">My No Kiss</a>)Dominic de Mattoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05171145945316152596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-39359273900929881922011-01-03T08:03:57.922-08:002011-01-03T08:03:57.922-08:00Hehehe, awesomely cruel. It's too bad you had ...Hehehe, awesomely cruel. It's too bad you had to cut some - I wanted to see more :-)Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-47758806538075534352011-01-03T06:30:14.892-08:002011-01-03T06:30:14.892-08:00Ooo! LOL, this was great. Sometimes losing focus i...Ooo! LOL, this was great. Sometimes losing focus is WAY more fun. Silly girl, but I like her.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-15912384875535187982011-01-02T16:00:52.603-08:002011-01-02T16:00:52.603-08:00LOL, she told him didn't she- but staying focu...LOL, she told him didn't she- but staying focused isn't always whats on a guys mind. great scene!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-76445465693148759792011-01-02T15:56:39.821-08:002011-01-02T15:56:39.821-08:00Love the imagery and the tension! And I really lik...Love the imagery and the tension! And I really liked the neon sign part.Nicole Settlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06205918337710478398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-84898408596599043862011-01-02T15:50:31.977-08:002011-01-02T15:50:31.977-08:00So much sizzle for such a short excerpt. Poor Jack...So much sizzle for such a short excerpt. Poor Jackson.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-23690010434419369342011-01-02T15:25:14.174-08:002011-01-02T15:25:14.174-08:00I love this back and forth especially:
--“Of co...I love this back and forth especially: <br /><br /> --“Of course I care. Why do you think I’ve been watching out for you?”<br /> “Is that what it was? I thought you were being a pain in my ass.” I shrugged, a mocking smile on the corner of my lips.--<br /><br />My favorite kind of hero!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-18328960730581181872011-01-02T15:09:18.602-08:002011-01-02T15:09:18.602-08:00Hehe another almost kiss with a blue eyed Jackson:...Hehe another almost kiss with a blue eyed Jackson:) I liked this scene a lot! Thanks so much for posting! :DFrankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-88484263709821720122011-01-02T15:07:09.619-08:002011-01-02T15:07:09.619-08:00I liked the voice in this. Good build-up. Well don...I liked the voice in this. Good build-up. Well done!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-9985108503013802442011-01-02T15:04:21.565-08:002011-01-02T15:04:21.565-08:00*puts face in front of the fan* woo hoo, girlie! E...*puts face in front of the fan* woo hoo, girlie! Excellent!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-63888554231178523742011-01-02T14:52:30.241-08:002011-01-02T14:52:30.241-08:00Poor Jackson, getting iced. I've been in his s...Poor Jackson, getting iced. I've been in his situation.... it sucks.<br /><br />Give the poor guy a break.lol<br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-87610369514803710532011-01-02T14:18:46.367-08:002011-01-02T14:18:46.367-08:00I really like these characters, I could get a feel...I really like these characters, I could get a feel for them quite well. I wouldn't have minded reading more of it, that's for sure!Devin Bondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778910287345364738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-76017764126798499402011-01-02T14:16:25.814-08:002011-01-02T14:16:25.814-08:00This was GREAT. I was right in the scene with them...This was GREAT. I was right in the scene with them. Perfect details and nicely paced. I got a feeling for both characters immediately :) Thank you for sharing! I'd be interested in reading more :DJessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-6097396926364154062011-01-02T13:18:38.335-08:002011-01-02T13:18:38.335-08:00ooh nice. I really liked the "pain in the ass...ooh nice. I really liked the "pain in the ass" bit of dialogueSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-6697002346654764912011-01-02T12:01:41.078-08:002011-01-02T12:01:41.078-08:00Even though I am FOREVER Team C.J., have to admit ...Even though I am FOREVER Team C.J., have to admit I like me some Jackson in this scene. Ava, darling, you should totally give him a chance. :D<br /><br />Missed these characters!Amparo Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6227786909099691933.post-29634892450148252682011-01-02T11:50:36.338-08:002011-01-02T11:50:36.338-08:00Hey great idea - I'm going to do this - as par...Hey great idea - I'm going to do this - as part of my writing resolutions I am hoping to participate more in the online writing world and to hopefully boost my online presence. So thanks for the idea...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16104430835416581184noreply@blogger.com